Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Wednesday Book Review: Cyberdrome (Joseph and David Rhea)

Cyberdrome (Joseph and David Rhea)

Reality can be hard to define. It can be what we believe or experience, more than what actually exists. That seems to be the message of Cyberdrome, although it is not a message clearly delivered.

Another entry in my small collection of independent authors discovered on the Kindle online discussion forums, the novel is a techno-thriller set in a near future dominated by the technology we may recognize from our lives today, but that has progressed to the point of nearly dominating the human race. Virtual reality has become a matter of course for most people, and major corporations and governments entrust their operations and secrets to vast computer arrays that function more like organisms than machines. The paraplegic computer specialist Alek Grey is the chief protagonist in what appears to be a case of cyber terrorism inflicted on the company of his father. The company—Cyberdrome—is revealed by the media as a possible cause of and, paradoxically, savior from a nanobot plague outbreak that has caused thousands of deaths and the quarantine of the entire state of Utah. The action very quickly moves into the virtual realm as Alek and a team of security officers (including his former fiancĂ©e) are inserted into the company eponymous mainframe, a DNA-based liquid memory computer with nearly unlimited capacity, but somewhat unstable operation.

Inside, virtual-Alek (with fully functional legs, to his amazement) is almost immediately imperiled by a variety of hostile programs, which the Rheas present as giant robotic animals. He crosses paths with a sentinel program named Javid Rho, one member of the cloud of security programs (think of them as really, really, awesome versions of Norton Antivirus) sent to contain the cyber-attack. As they try to track down the cause and culprit behind the attack, they become involved with several other sentient programs that have escaped from the “simulations” that the company was using Cyberdrome to run…complex “planet” models, allowed to develop and evolve entire ecosystems in semi-controlled experiments. These simulations are nominally used to help the company develop a means of destroying the nanobot plague that threatens humanity, but as is usually the way of it in these stories, not everything is as it seems.

In many ways, Cyberdrome is a fairly standard entry into the sort of high-tech thriller genre that captivates fans (like me) of popular authors such as Michael Crichton and the writing tandem of Douglas Preston and Lincoln Child. The small set of tightly defined—if fairly stereotypical—characters in a dangerous, foreign environment, and battling a fast-moving and technological problem, simply screams Crichton in particular. The problem I had with the book is that although the Rheas have managed to build a near-limitless world inside Cyberdrome by means of the simulation planets, the story just barely touches any of it in a meaningful way. So too is the “real” world (you know…meatspace) given short shrift here. I would have loved to know just a little bit more about the nanobot plague and the world into which it intrudes, but here it’s treated more as vague background setting than an actual problem to be solved. How was the plague contained? Why were the nanobots developed in the first place?

If the story is going to continue into any future works, then exploring these dark corners of Cyberdrome and the future world it inhabits is going to be of utmost importance. If not, I don’t think there is much interesting story left to tell.

Grade: B-

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  1. Thanks for the review, Jon.

    It's nice to see another person's detailed overview of my story, because it helps me see which messages were conveyed correctly, and which ones weren't. I'm happy to see that you understood most of what I was trying to say in this story.

    Regarding the fact that we barely scratch the surface of what's going on in the real world as well as hundred other simulated worlds, I can assure you that the sequel will dive deeply into all of those areas. As you say, without them, why write another book? My brother and I spent years outlining a rich universe with multiple story-arcs that could populate many novels, so I'm glad you were able to see that potential. I also wanted to end the first book with the reader satisfied, but still wanting more, and hopefully I succeeded.

    Thanks again for your insights!

    Joseph Rhea
    Author of Cyberdrome

  2. Joseph,

    Thank you for taking the time to read my review! I'm glad I was able to articulate my feelings toward the book, without sounding catty. Maybe a few of my readers will nab the book on Amazon, too.

    Looking forward to the sequel!

  3. Great review, Jon.

    As an indie author myself, I like to say I'm friends with Joseph, though only in the cyber sense. At any rate, I'm familiar with Cyberdrome and its premise, but I must say, your one review says more about the book than anything else I've come across.

    You are an excellent reviewer. Lots of "meat" without any spoilers, and unafraid to say what you really think, including what you don't like. My favorite kind of review.

    Congrats, Joseph, on the review, and I envy you for getting my favorite kind. So Jon, if you ever have the itch, shoot me an email and I'll gladly provide some reading material. I would love to have my work examined by a reviewer like you, including taking the heat if I don't make the grade.